I woke up
It was late
I left my morning
To the fate
All alone
Not a soul in sight
I fucked up
So I tried to fight
Too fogged
Too disturbed
Too sedated
Too curbed
May be I could kill myself
May be I could kill you
May be I m dead already?
May be I m just blue
I exist
But I m invisible
My flame
Is extinguishable
I got up
But hit the floor
I could see
Life close its door
Too cold
Too frozen
Too numb
Too deadened
May be I could kill myself
May be I could kill you
May be I m dead already?
May be I m just blue
Who cares?
Who cares?
When I m gone
When I m dead
It’s the same
All the same.
It was late
I left my morning
To the fate
All alone
Not a soul in sight
I fucked up
So I tried to fight
Too fogged
Too disturbed
Too sedated
Too curbed
May be I could kill myself
May be I could kill you
May be I m dead already?
May be I m just blue
I exist
But I m invisible
My flame
Is extinguishable
I got up
But hit the floor
I could see
Life close its door
Too cold
Too frozen
Too numb
Too deadened
May be I could kill myself
May be I could kill you
May be I m dead already?
May be I m just blue
Who cares?
Who cares?
When I m gone
When I m dead
It’s the same
All the same.
i feel alone... read the title...
11 comments:
hmmm...i think u need a boy friend...
Get up get goin and go mug...haha!
--GG
hmmm...just saw ur other posts...will read patiently when i have time...
pls speak to me through comments.
U seem inclined to Death Metal level lyrics( sorry if this is an insult to your expression), but i like death metal sans the vocals...so i dont really like this shit
maybe i can help you, you have inspired me to write like you - but on positive things...just keep a watch!!
Love
--GG
Am male/20
Guess u r female, same age--but does not really matter
@ GG
thanks for your concern...
of course i don see how a boyfriend wud help...
yes.. it seems death metal.. i have written positive stuff too though... i like the way i write and i write abt anything... but i need an outlet for my emotions... when u are upset frnds are rare to find... so sli...
i m glad i inspire u to write nice things :)
GG. Stop being a despo.
When you're one of the few to land on your feet
what do you do to make ends meet?
teach
make 'em mad, make 'em sad, make 'em add two and two
make 'em me, make 'em you, make 'em do what you want them to
make 'em laugh, make 'em cry, make 'em lay down and die
Similar sentiments??
really loved ur poem... short,simple,understandable,yet somehow inconceivable for ppl... will wait for more from you
I like yours lyrics. Much.
well well well...i guess i would be your 1st fan if you started writing for any band... good lyrics..and beautiful ways of expression!
you need to get your act together. Only you can pick yourself up. perhaps see a analyst.
This would make a nice song! not pleasant perhaps, but nice. Good work!
@puppet
miss you
@abhishek, anon, niharika, pratyu
thank you
@edson_dias
as you can see i m well :)
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